My sketch of how to update the conditional sequence of QVS into post-reverse QUenya and to Sindarin (based on the introduced Noldorin hints). Starts with a transcript of QVS itself, followed by an update and a Sindarinization:
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B8gjHaj7Lr5WYWl0ZUVJalJoQnM
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B8gjHaj7Lr5Wd25mcnIxX055S0k
Tamas Ferencz Sep 30, 2017 (21:44)
What's "post-reverse" Quenya?
Александр Запрягаев Sep 30, 2017 (22:20)
Paul Strack Sep 30, 2017 (22:24)
The particle ai "supposing" does reappear in Tolkien's later writings, but qe "if" seems to have changed to either ce or qui.
eldamo.org - Eldamo : Quenya : qui
Have you considered making those changes as well?
Александр Запрягаев Sep 30, 2017 (22:27)
Paul Strack Oct 01, 2017 (00:43)
For you inflectional forms like S. udulaen, I think those might be too much. I strongly suspect that Tolkien mentioned ON. in the original text, rather than N., because he didn't envision this inflection surviving in later forms of the language.
Regarding qe/ce/qui, I need to go back and looking the originals. The last time I looked, I ended up favoring qui, but that was quite a while ago and I no longer remember why.
Александр Запрягаев Oct 01, 2017 (00:48)