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Björn Fromén, Quenya Chat, Tamas Ferencz

Tamas Ferencz Nov 18, 2014 (11:12)

a distichon

Lip-lip-liptar i hloimie quettaryar et i péti
Nuhta i luime melin, intye se metta qualit

Drip-drip-drip those poisonous words from her mouth
Stop the flood my dear, lest you yourself die in the end

Björn Fromén Nov 19, 2014 (22:18)

i hloimie quettaryar ’those poisonous words of hers’ -- creative use of the article, nás mára nin.

intye ... qualil: I think consistency demands either imle ... qualil or intye ... qualit.

Tamas Ferencz Nov 19, 2014 (23:16)

+Björn Fromén point taken!