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Tamas Ferencz
Nov 13, 2017 (12:08)
Quenya nursery rhyme. The metre is
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Ter híseva landa norta olombo
Ho tínila helma talta i ló
Ló tilleron láma ráka i quilde
To optoya háma þossea hó.
Robert Reynolds
Nov 13, 2017 (16:36)
Arandóreo nostari ké *apartier onnaltain nyanda ve ta pá Úlairion Roitale i Er Kormava ter *Eryandóre.
*parta-
'to teach, (lit. cause to learn)'
*Eryan(d)óre
<
erya + -n(d)óre
or perhaps
*Erin(n)(d)óre
<
erin(qua) + -n(d)óre
'Eriador, Lonely Land, wilderness'
nyanda
'nursery story or rhyme' (from √NYAÐA in Qenya Lexicon)
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Tamas Ferencz
The rhyming sounds very fitting/effective for your purpose, and the imagery is very evocative. Nice!
Robert Reynolds Nov 13, 2017 (16:36)
*parta- 'to teach, (lit. cause to learn)'
*Eryan(d)óre < erya + -n(d)óre or perhaps *Erin(n)(d)óre < erin(qua) + -n(d)óre 'Eriador, Lonely Land, wilderness'
nyanda 'nursery story or rhyme' (from √NYAÐA in Qenya Lexicon)
+Tamas Ferencz The rhyming sounds very fitting/effective for your purpose, and the imagery is very evocative. Nice!