+Björn Fromén true, this is not a regular distichon. I was considering to write the second line as mailie urya i hrón, séren milya i hón, to make it a pentameter, but hrón may not be a valid form, so I went for an irregular meter which still sounds good in my opinion.
Rick Spell May 26, 2015 (16:00)
Rick Spell May 26, 2015 (18:28)
Björn Fromén May 26, 2015 (23:52)
Tamas Ferencz May 27, 2015 (10:16)
true, this is not a regular distichon. I was considering to write the second line as mailie urya i hrón, séren milya i hón, to make it a pentameter, but hrón may not be a valid form, so I went for an irregular meter which still sounds good in my opinion.
Björn Fromén May 27, 2015 (20:55)
I don't think hrón needs to be considered less valid than hráve, though, so I would have preferred the pentameter with its nice Leonine rhyme.