Aaah. Increasingly hard. And lots of newer grammar as well.
Athya, Tárinyar, tekitása ríkan,
Lá kenilden ñwalyan i•ríkieinen,
Sampan i•quettanyar, ata xaranyel,
Lindeo lámar;
Ma merilye líri ehtanta rie?
Andar, sennar — nótan i•turkar h' arya!
Karinwanna mára únonte tier
kariendenyo.
+#Quenya +#Original +#FixedForm +#Quantitative +#Accentual
Tamas Ferencz Sep 26, 2016 (18:02)
Help, my Queens, I am trying to write it,
You don't see I am hurt by the effort,
I combine my words, again I desire you,
Echoes of music;
Do you wish the songs to form a garland?
Long ones, short ones - counted(?) strong ones(?) (?)
Having made good (?) countless songs
of my making.
Александр Запрягаев Sep 26, 2016 (21:25)
Tamas Ferencz Sep 26, 2016 (21:33)
Tamas Ferencz Sep 26, 2016 (21:34)
Björn Fromén Sep 26, 2016 (21:41)
Tamas Ferencz Sep 26, 2016 (21:44)
Александр Запрягаев Sep 27, 2016 (12:01)
Also, I'd rather use the more correct Tárienyar instead of the analogical one. But the metre is restrictive.
Andre Polykanine Oct 15, 2016 (13:43)
Александр Запрягаев Oct 15, 2016 (19:04)
Andre Polykanine Oct 15, 2016 (19:33)
Andre Polykanine Oct 15, 2016 (19:34)
Александр Запрягаев Oct 15, 2016 (19:59)