Na toled anwareb aur ab vinuial io annan min dîn Ardhon, ned i ennas 'lam ú-laew a chalen laew athan hí, adh in pherinain rem adh alwed athan hí, Bilba Pogodion darthast ar-fen na i fen ospol fenog* ro-dhaer i raethast na i thail daw dîn (dússen* parthannui*) - Mithrandir odul.
fenog, diminutive for of fena, ", tube, pipe for smoking". dússen, tús- "combed" parthannui, parthannen, partha- "neatly, orderly"
Sometimes when I re-read my translations, I find odd words, and think "what did I think here, why did I chose this word?". Iin this case ú-remmui. I guess ú-rem would be better, but still... I now went with anwareb.
Hjalmar Holm Mar 30, 2015 (18:43)
I now went with anwareb.