G+ LoME Archive
Aug 06, 2018 (02:26)
Patan telqui cantanen auresse,
Patan telco attanen endauresse,
Ar patan telqui neldenen andúnesse.
Aug 06, 2018 (06:57)
Very nice. I see nothing I’d change, except maybe following the “last declineable word” rule:
i hanquenta: Atan (mal lá Elda)
Aug 06, 2018 (17:33)
I forgot about that rule. I think I like it in this case. It helps the repeat of the phrases.