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Tamas Ferencz
May 29, 2015 (11:55)
Two lesser asclepiads.
Líre nwalca macil , ulle i carne yár,
Alme nyéna ve Fui, naina
qualin firimon
i fírimon.
Cruel blade sang, the red blood spilled,
Let us weep like the Night, lament the dead man.
The metre is
x x | - uu - || - uu - | u -
where x can be short or long.
Björn Fromén
May 30, 2015 (00:10)
To fit the metre, shouldn't the last word rather be
fire
?
Tamas Ferencz
May 30, 2015 (00:23)
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Björn Fromén
puhta! I messed it up again.
Björn Fromén May 30, 2015 (00:10)
Tamas Ferencz May 30, 2015 (00:23)