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Tamas Ferencz May 29, 2015 (11:55)

Two lesser asclepiads.

Líre nwalca macil , ulle i carne yár,
Alme nyéna ve Fui, naina qualin firimon i fírimon.

Cruel blade sang, the red blood spilled,
Let us weep like the Night, lament the dead man.

The metre is

x x | - uu - || - uu - | u -

where x can be short or long.

Björn Fromén May 30, 2015 (00:10)

To fit the metre, shouldn't the last word rather be fire?

Tamas Ferencz May 30, 2015 (00:23)

+Björn Fromén puhta! I messed it up again.